Thesis Statement

As I'm looking for words to explain my thesis, I'm going back to the basics and trying to find a better thesis statement.

So I'm listing the concepts of my current statement:
- Temporary Relief
- Homesick / lonely
- Hearing voice
- Remote
- Previously Recorded
- Cute, fuzzy, cozy

The depression of loneliness and homesickness experience by many people can be temporarily avoided by hearing the voice of a loved one.

This doesn't contain the fact that it is a pillow and carry a fuzzy and cute idea.

By hearing a small sound clip of the loved one and hugging the source of the sound, the lonely and homesick user can have a temporary relief of missing their families, friends and so on.

The thesis statements above don't say who the target audience is. Also they (and the project) are too wide. This is a general problem of the project that I have to solve soon. I thought it would be a project for people at my age and situation: 17-30 age, living far away from home.

I am studying the situation of being homesick and lonely, and finding way to give temporary relief with tools of technology such as tactile feedback and audio album of loved ones because the idea of being alone effects the productivity of the age group of 17-30.